In the past few weeks we have been learning about descriptive writing.
Witch sentence do you like the best?
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
In the past few weeks we have been learning about descriptive writing.
Witch sentence do you like the best?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Kahu,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your great sentences with us. I really like the one with 'Leo has razor sharp teeth and a big mouth'. He sounds very terrifying. I wouldn't want to meet Leo's razor sharp teeth.
Keep up the great learning and blogging,
:) Sharon - Te Ara Tūhura Education Programme Leader